Is the topic clearly related to education? Is your introductory paragraph interesting and relevant? (How can this be made even b
1) Is the topic clearly related to education? (2). Is your introductory paragraph interesting and relevant? (How can this be made even better?) (3). Is there a clear thesis at the end of the intro paragraph? (Is it argumentative or just factual? How can it be improved?) (4). Is there a clear focus in the […]