Women Discrimination and Empowerment in Pride and Prejudice

So I have an incomplete draft that I’m already working on. I just need help making the paper more cohesive and structuring my ideas, so everything works together and actually makes sense. I want my main idea or thesis to still be the direction in which the paper goes in, but feel free to change what you need! You don’t need to keep my sources or the examples I give…well maybe one or two, but if they interfere with your writing process then it’s okay not to use any.