Revise a minimum of 10 sentences/paragraphs (from a business journal article of your choosing) to reflect better the you attitude.

Assignment 1 – Choose ONE: A or B 

A: Revise a minimum of 10 sentences/paragraphs (from a business journal article of your choosing) to reflect better the you attitude. Organize your paper as follows:

• Cover Page
• Introduction on papers purpose and key concepts (importance of you attitude in business writing)
• Body
  • Original sentence 1:
  • Revised sentence 1:
  • What makes it improved
  • Original sentence 2:
  • Revised sentence 2:
  • What makes it improved
  • (and so on)
• A conclusion paragraph stating how your paper accomplished the purposed stated in the introduction of the paper.
• References page (alphabetized) that includes references for all cited sources in the paper.

B: Revise an email message on a new company policy. Organize your paper as follows:

• Cover Page
• Introduction on papers purpose and key concepts (purpose of email in workplace, how problems can negatively impact the business and/or employee, and why careful attention to writing email is important,etc.)
• Body
  • A brief discussion on the problems in the original email, followed by a copy of the original email (graphic labeled Figure 1)
  • A brief discussion on the improvement in the revised email, followed by a copy of the revised email (graphic labeled Figure 2)
• A conclusion paragraph stating how your paper accomplished the purposed stated in the introduction of the paper.
• References page (alphabetized) that includes references for all cited sources in the paper.