The Degradation of Everest At the top of the world. one can expect a sense of wonder. pride. and achievement.

L.) The Degradation of Everest At the top of the world. one can expect a sense of wonder. pride. and achievement. The result of hardship shows and one can bask in the glory of the summit. However. all is not great at the crown of the Earth. Each year. several thousand pounds of trash are left on Mount Everest. "With the amount of climbers rising each year. the amount of garbage left on the mountain can only increase. Though local govermnents do their best to clean up the area. the altitude make cleanup efforts more than difficult. The trash affects the local enviromnent. polluting the watershed. and even making other summit efforts more difficult. As more people attempt to summit. "traffic jams" in a sense are prone to occur. These traffic jams. in a worst case scenario. cause great loss of life. as seen in the 1996 Everest disaster. The mountain is crowded with trash and people. and it is necessary to regulate and restrict the amount of climbers on Everest each year. In the spring of 2019. after the winter snow had melted. an expedition backed by the Nepalize govermnent collected over eleven tons of garbage off the face of Mount Everest (National Geographic. Trash and overcrowding at the top ofrhe world). That is the equivalent of a fully loaded bus worth of trash left by climbers attempting to reach the summit. Over 22.0001bs of garbage were collected three years ago. Since then. the problem of trash on Mount Everest has become a problem that can no longer be neglected. The slheer amount of garbage left by climbers is unimaginable to most. On average. each climber will leave about 13 pounds worth of garbage behind on the mountain while on their way to the summit [National Geographic. For}? and oremrmvdmg or the top offlie world).

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