You will need to revise this paper that has been uploaded in a way that gears towards the feedback reflected below.
You will need to revise this paper that has been uploaded in a way that gears towards the feedback reflected below. Make sure to heavily revise this paper and follow all comments. You may add your own revisions and rewriting.
Feedback:
Make sure your paper is in APA format. Some of your sentences seem repetitive and I’m not sure it really explains how you think sports adds to education. You do a nice job of talking about sports and things students can get from it such as leadership and teamwork, but how does this impact education?
1) Introduction, including your position statement- You don’t really say clearly what your position is, I was able to find it after re-reading your paper.
2) Evidence supporting your position, with a statement evaluating the credibility of sources – be sure you find a way to write this sentence somewhere in your paper.
3) Summary/conclusion that proposes a solution/solutions for achieving your position in sport – be sure you add some solutions to your paper, it would make sense to have this paragraph before your conclusion.
4) Cite references at the end of the paper- check over APA format, we are in the 7th edition of APA.
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