This is the draft and some requirements need to be added to complete the project:

This is the draft and some requirements need to be added to complete the project:

This is a great effort. There is lots of great information here, and it is well-presented in terms of tone and style. However, the paper’s focus and purpose are unclear. Refer to the RAFT strategy mentioned in the Writing Tips video. Your role and audience are fairly clear, but the format and topic are not. The current format is part basic research paper and part compare-contrast paper. That mixing also affects the topic, which, broadly, should be three technologies and their impact on business. You only need to analyze three technologies and their impacts, not compare which is better in any category. Altogether, there are about six different technologies, three of which are under the umbrella of Temu. To narrow it, you can cover Temu as whole, one EV example, and IBM Quantum OR you can discuss the three technologies that just so happen to be used by Temu (or some other combination of three you are most satisfied with).