Based on my draft submission earlier, following is the lecturer’s comments: –

Based on my draft submission earlier, following is the lecturer’s comments: –

Good effort, my feedback/comments to your essay outline as follows:

The example cited for transparency using Patagonia is better to be replaced with another company as Patagonia was used in the CSR lecture example. You should also include analysis of relevant CSR theories and frameworks such as from E Freeman, M Friedman, M Porter, M Kramer etc as discussed in the CSR lecture slides. Please be reminded to use at least 10 or more literature references for citations and references in your essay.

Slides used during class sessions are attached.

Avoid those examples of companies used under the slides. Hence Patagonia cannot be used.

Can use two different companies for transparency versus greenwashing from two different industries.

Apart from Amazon, please use another company.

Must use 80% peer reviewed articles.

1.5 spacing, Harvard style referencing to be used.

No bullets point.

Please use creditable sources of at least min 15 or more citations.

Total word count should be 3000 with plus 10% option.

Wikipedia referencing cannot be used, paper should be plagiarism free.

Please include analysis of relevant CSR theories and frameworks such as from E Freeman, M Friedman, M Porter, M Kramer etc as discussed in the CSR lecture slides to write the comparative essay. Need to ensure all angles are well analysed under therories and framework.

Having a sone images will be good to strengthen the comparative essat, so that an excellent paper can be delivered. Sample essay provided for your guidance