A quick glance tells us that development will definitely be an issue with this draft:

A quick glance tells us that development will definitely be an issue with this draft: you’ve written a classic five paragraph discussion (which we know would be inadequate for the discussion of even a single article—and for this project you’re supposed to be discussing six separate texts by six different authors).

Sure enough, you attempt to cover each selected assigned article and its “paired” additional source in a single paragraph, which means each article gets only a handful of sentences (which of necessity consist largely of summary). To be clear, you absolutely need to be spending multiple paragraphs on each article you’re discussing, in order to have the space for presentation, contextualization, quotation, examples, analysis, and connections—all the textual-engagement skills we’ve been practicing all semester.