please no plagiarism and please follow the instructions. USE THE TEMPLATE ATTACHED

please no plagiarism and please follow the instructions. USE THE TEMPLATE ATTACHED

Step 2: Analyze an email sent from Rita, an employee at Carpets Now, to Iman, the company’s owner and CEO. In this email, Rita is trying to persuade Iman to implement a new company policy about paid time off.

Analyze the document for tone and style.

Identify one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of tone. For example, do you see language that is overly emotional, includes humor, or a negative or positive tone? In other words, you are looking for aspects of the author’s attitude.

Provide specific details on why you chose it and how you would revise it.

Identify one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of style. For example, do you see overly formal words, wordiness, or complex sentence structure? In other words, you are looking for errors in syntax, sentence structure, and word choice.

Provide specific details on why you chose it and how you would revise it.

Step 3: When you are finished, submit your completed assignment template below.

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Week 5 Assignment – Communication Techniques

Week 5 Assignment – Communication Techniques

Criteria Ratings Pts

Identify one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of tone. Provide specific details on why you chose it and how you would revise it.

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27.5 to >24.75 pts

Exemplary

Identified one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of tone. Provide specific details on why you chose it and how you would revise it.

24.75 to >21.99 pts

Competent

Identified one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of tone. Provided details but the details did not explain why you chose it and how you would revise it.

21.99 to >19.24 pts

Satisfactory

Identified one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of tone but did not provide details.

19.24 to >16.49 pts

Needs Improvement

Identified one aspect of the email that could be improved but it did not aply to tone.

16.49 to >0 pts

Unacceptable

Did not identify an aspect of the email that could be improved.

/ 27.5 pts

Identify one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of style. Provide specific details on why you chose it and how you would revise.

view longer description

27.5 to >24.75 pts

Exemplary

Identified one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of style. Provide specific details on why you chose it and how you would revise.

24.75 to >21.99 pts

Competent

Identified one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of style. Provided details but the details did not explain why you chose it and how you would revise it..

21.99 to >19.24 pts

Satisfactory

Identified one aspect of the email that could be improved in terms of style but did not provide any details.

19.24 to >16.49 pts

Needs Improvement

Identified one aspect of the email that could be improved but it did not aply to style.

16.49 to >0 pts

Unacceptable

Did not identify one aspect of the email that could be improved.

/ 27.5 pts

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