Revise and supplement the research paper to 8 pages.

Revise and supplement the research paper to 8 pages. The original text is attached to the document. Very strict review, no plagiarism.

Requirements:

1. Add more influences of social comparison theory on mass communication and the influence of social comparison theory on the use of social media.

2. Changes and additions are made according to the professor’s comments and Essay writing Requirements and Guidelines.

professor’s comments：

Overall, this is an average outcome. Your journal choice stands out as a positive element. Unfortunately, your journal is lacking depth in some regards and your media and personal examples are missing each of the context levels. These and a missing cover page and lacking in-text citations are things that standout as elements that could be improved for the next paper. APA issues cost you easy points and should be addressed.

Essay writing Requirements and Guidelines:

1.You should have the following section:

1) Briefly summarize all the major sections (rationale, methods, result, and discussion) of a research article on either: Social Comparison theory. The research piece (Human experimental only) must be taken from a communication journal (or related field), be peer-reviewed, and cited using APA style (in-text and reference page). Use a library database (Academic Search Premier) to find the article. Make sure the journal is available first (in full text). This paper is not about the article, but about the theory and applying that theory.

2) Provide mass media examples of this “theory” being used. For example, if the research article you pick deals with dating and Halo Effects, this section and the following should have nothing to do with dating. Provide logical support for how the example context you pick is in line with the concepts of the theory (not the study). Don’t use examples from the research piece. The example should be taken from popular culture (books, films, commercials, billboards, Internet). i.e. you must provide enough detail about the example to make it clear how it fits the theory you pick. Make sure you address all the context levels and fully describe a “specific” context that the theory applies (Cited in APA in-text and References). Pick one context and provide a rich description!

3) Provide a specific “Personal (happened to you for real)” “interpersonal (between you and someone you are close with)” example of this theory being used. Provide logical support for how this example is in line with the concepts of the theory (not the study). Make sure you address all the context levels in that interaction. Pick “one” context and provide a rich description. Make sure you address how this context is both “personal” and “interpersonal.”