I have attached the two comments my teacher made and the paper. For the next step, you need to add a methodology section.

I have attached the two comments my teacher made and the paper. For the next step, you need to add a methodology section. It is supposed to be 2 pages long. Here is the outline of it. 1. Why I selected my cases? ( because I am from the Middle East and want to bring more awareness to it as well as try to find a solution) 2. What are my factors? ( 2-3 factors only) based on my themes, my research question, and the potential types of evidence. 3. Write about each factor and use 10-15 references for the methodology part. 4. Write about each factor.

In the first 1-2 paragraphs, you will first state your factors, then state your research question, and finally, answer your research question. Then, you can move on to the outline that I provided above.