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please can you check how was the writing i have , i know you gave me but , just if you thin need to rewrite please, Individual lifestle level: At an individual level, it is important to analyze the overall lifestyle of the community of Lewisham. It is also important to analyze the level and prevalence of diseases that may lead to musculoskeletal issues such as obesity, smoking, and malnutrition (Briggs et al., 2019). A study conducted by the Lewisham ‘Joint Strategies Needs Assessment’ (JSNA) discovered that physical inactivity may be a major contributing factor to the occurrence of musculoskeletal conditions in the local area (Lewisham Annual Public Health Report, 2021-2022). Around 33% of the population in Lewisham is obese in comparison to the 24.2% in England (Hussain et al., 2023). Moreover, according to the Lewisham Council, many individuals in Lewisham smoke more than the national average, which is another leading cause of the presentation of different musculoskeletal issues (Bartley, 2017). The black minority of Lewisham has been observed to be at higher risk of health conditions such as stroke, hypertension, and even diabetes which also leads to increased inactivity and the development of joint pain, stiffness, and musculoskeletal conditions. The Health and Well-being strategy also highlights the concerning factor that there is a prevalence of mental illnesses which are presented by the Lewisham Public more than the London average (Warwick-Booth,2021). These mental h