Explain AT LEAST THREE CHANGES IN DICTION (WORD CHOICE) that you made. How did you eliminate basic, generic vocabulary and replace the words with words imbuing movement, sound, color, texture, and emotion?

This holiday holds a special place in your heart because it allows you to connect with your faith and renew your spirituality, and it brings people together in a way that fosters unity among your family, friends, and the larger community at your mosque. The holiday marks the end of Ramadan, a month during which Muslims fast from sunrise to sunset as a way of spiritual reflection. On this day, your family often engages in special prayers, dresses in new clothes, feasts on delicious food, exchanges gifts, and spends time with family and friends. Your most favorite part of the holiday is Eidi, which is money given to children and sometimes even adults during the celebrations. It’s a tradition in many Muslim cultures to give Eidi as a gesture of love and generosity, celebrating the festive occasion. On this special occasion, many Muslim households are filled with the aroma of incense sticks, as in your religions, angels are attracted to good smells, and incense sticks are a part of this tradition. Do you know what my favorite holiday is?

Apply the following rules

1–MLA format (should be PERFECT by now–review the video posted Semester Resources Module if you have any questions.)

2–Write 400-500 words.

3–Include and highlight the entire sentences using the following punctuation:

a. A semi-colon used correctly in BLUE.

b. A comma used to set off a non-essential phrase in YELLOW.

c. A comma and conjunction used to combine two independent clauses in GREEN.

4–Analyze: In a separate paragraph (not included in the word count for your description), explain the following changes you made to revise your writing and make it more detailed and descriptive:

a. Explain AT LEAST THREE CHANGES IN DICTION (WORD CHOICE) that you made. How did you eliminate basic, generic vocabulary and replace the words with words imbuing movement, sound, color, texture, and emotion?

b. Explain AT LEAST TWO CHANGES IN ORGANIZATION that you made. Did you find a way to begin your piece more creatively? End it with a mic drop? Did you rearrange, eliminate or add specific details? Why?

MAKE SOME REVISIONS to make it more DETAILED AND DESCRIPTIVE.

Requirements: 400 words