The importance of revising my article is very important, it allows me to use proper feedback and advise to perfect and reformat my article. this is critical because without proper feedb

The importance of revising my article is very important, it allows me to use proper feedback and advise to perfect and reformat my article. this is critical because without proper feedback my article can lack depth, this can make my article flat and undesirable to read. There are many things that I can do to improve my article in a large-scale change, such as restructuring my paragraphs or even making my into paragraph more detailed to the reader and giving more detail about the article. There are many things that I could use to improve my article in a small-scale change, such as the flow or grammatical changes that can be made to improve the article. 

For your response posts, address the following:

1. Identify a peer's post that discusses a large-scale strategy different than your own. Then discuss how you might apply that strategy to your work.
2. Identify a peer's post that discusses a small-scale strategy different than your own. Then discuss how you might apply that strategy to your work.