The Brave New World novel

Reference: (my claim) My position on the issue of the writing prompt is that as a society, we have become consumed by entertainment, which is detrimental to our culture.

Reference: The Brave New World novel

Activity 21: Analyzing Your Draft Rhetorically

Now it is time to think more about the reader and begin moving toward a reader-based draft that is ready to submit to your instructor for feedback. Think about the following questions.

Is the reader provided with what he or she needs to understand the claim and ideas?

Is there enough support for each point?

Do the arguments work together?

Do the transitions between different parts of the arguments make sense?

Is the conclusion following the rest of the paper? Is it more than just a restatement of the introduction?

Have I accomplished my rhetorical purpose? Have I engaged the reader’s interest?

Has the claim changed the reader’s mind? Is there allowed the reader to see the book more clearly?

After thinking about these questions, develop a short revision plan for your paper. Write it down here.