I have to produce piece in which the narrator creates a sense of drama and suspense.

Hi, I need help with a writing assignment. 

I have to produce piece in which the narrator creates a sense of drama and suspense. 

My piece is about a girl that kills her mother due to all the trauma she has had in her life and how her mom controls everything she does. 

I have to include dark humor, imagery, and foreshadowing. 

I started it but I need help to finish it!

“What have you done”

The voice in the back of my head protested to my actions, but it was a long time coming. I stood over the lifeless body on the floor, the woman I took the life of. I knew it was wrong but every bone in my body had a different opinion. My mother was a malicious human being that cared for no one but herself.

The only person she had to blame is herself. The date was November 5th two days before my birthday and I was just so angry and frustrated towards her. I knew I had to keep this anger inside me to protect my brother but it was just too hard. I remember ….

Please let me know if you have any questions!