Or, how has your understanding of modernization changed after reading about the Cultural Revolution?
For the 2nd essay, please do the following:
Choose anything you like from the materials we have covered so far, with the exception of Eileen Chang’s and Ang Li’s Lust, Caution.
Discuss the connection between the themes from two different weeks. For example, what do the “Diaspora” texts tell you about Taiwan? Or, how has your understanding of modernization changed after reading about the Cultural Revolution?
For this essay, the emphasis will be on articulating a thesis/argument of your own. It should be strong, individual, persuasive, and yet balanced and supported by evidence.
Introduce historical background, author biography or content of the story/film only when necessary. Devote the main body of your essay to argument and/or analysis.
Before writing the essay two, also check the essay one’s suggestion. Here is the suggestion: I just realized my email concerning your first essay didn’t get through to you, and I do apologize for that. The essay is neatly written, with very clear layout and clear, effectively language. These are the strong points. What can be improved is the following:
1) You spent considerable length summarizing the plot, but didn’t get to compare the specific details of the story and the film until towards the end of p.4.
2) The comparisons are not focused on a chosen scene, and remain too general.
3) In terms of conclusion, what do the two works difference tell us? You touched upon that, especially at the very end of the essay, but it’s a bit too vague (such as the last sentence: “Chang and Lee show that sexual love cannot be used as a vehicle to attain political freedom”).
The grade for essay one is B.
For the essay 2’s topic, the film I choose is Farewell My Concubine and the length should be 4-5 pages. And the topic we need to compare is between Hongkong and Cultural revolution. Please feel free to discuss the film by these two sides please remember do not use too many sentenses to tell what is the story of the film. You need to discuss the culture and feeling but not describe the stroy of the film.
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