The rubric asks for at least 2 (specific) connections in the conclusion, which seems you may only have 1 or it is unc

 
 The rubric asks for at least 2 (specific) connections in the conclusion, which seems you may only have 1 or it is unclear.
I also noticed under mechanics at the bottom of the rubric it asks to clearly layout intro, reflection, and conclusion. I see you broke down the body into more specific headlines, which looks good, but I will leave this to your discretion whether you think it satisfies her criteria. I think your way seems professional but you are the higher experienced writer and just thought I would ask you to think about it.
I have not googled anything about AFO yet but I am interested. I am curious where you found that information, and if maybe it should have a source with it as it seems it may be extra to either book. Also the rubric wants a format of presenting the additional AFO. · Be sure to be very specific in your description of the activity or resource, including the format in which you think the additional material should be presented. (25 pts)

I think we are very close to being done. If I could only ask one thing of you that would be to keep the rubric on hand and use it as a checklist. Checking off all the criteria should result with full credit. Sorry again for not getting back to you sooner, I had a busy week but after completing an exam this morning I will be more readily available to reply to emails faster.