Statement of purpose Admission essay

I want to show my passion for machine learning/AI and use that knowledge in product management(Developing great products). In business school, I would like to polish all of these skills.  (Attaching the draft and some instruction for best results, Please rearrange/add/remove the essay as required ,Let me know how I can make my essay awesome)

I completed various responsibilities throughout my carrier, I worked as a Software developer(common), Consultant, Tech lead, Research assistant, and product manager. I love to solve people and define the road map of the work. For the past 5 years, I am involved in the machine learning domain, which is existing how it learns and helps so many ways to the users. Just like instead developing support cycle for user Conversational AI, Self-driving cars, health care, etc almost everything is revolutionized with the concept and make living being life better and better. My knowledge of machine learning will help my fellow leaders in structure to think of a product from a customer perspective and how we can use technologies to improve their life.   ]

My main motive for this degree is to learn more about business operation, strategy, planning, and execution. Thinking product as more holistically, thinking about consumer and feedback. Using data to identify and define the roadmap. Lead the team to achieve the best protentional and deliver the best product to make people’s lives better.

I would like to lead a team and build world-class products for users, how I can use my experience and machine learning to lead the team and product in the best possible place