An argumentative essay: encourage people to get covid-19 vaccine.

When you write an argumentative essay, your essay focuses on making an argument that will be convincing to your readers. Each paragraph should further that argument and must relate directly back to your thesis statement from your introduction paragraph.

For this assignment, you will develop an outline for your argumentative paper. An outline is meant to help you organize your points. Think of it as a skeleton that you will “flesh out” when you write your first draft. The more detail you include in the outline, the more likely you will develop a strong first draft. Further directions below:

·      You need to use a formal outline format; use the outline template provided below to help structure your outline.

·      You must write full sentences for the hook, the thesis statement, the topic/transition sentences, and the restatement of thesis.

·      Supporting points and details should not be full sentences. Think of them as bullet points that you will elaborate on when you write the first draft of your paper.

·      If you take any information from research, make sure to include a citation in APA style. However, make sure that your outline doesn’t rely too heavily on research. This paper is argumentative, not simply informative, so include your own original thoughts throughout.

How to use the outline template: Erase each line before typing into the space. You may add or delete supporting points or details. To add, simply place your cursor at the end of a line, hit Enter, and you will see a new number or letter appear. To delete, simply highlight the line and hit Delete or Backspace.  

I.              Introduction

A.   Hook: lockdown, stay at home orders, mass mandate, social distancing, are certainly safety protocol in place, but what is the best practice to protect us from the virus?

B.    Background info: The US has 3 vaccines approved by FDA in proven of covid-19 immune effectiveness.

C.    Background info: We need urgently achieve herd immunity which is more 70% of vaccinated people in population.

D.   Thesis statement:  As soon as possible, all people regardless of races, sexes, and religion should get covid-19 vaccine in order to combat the deadly virus.

II.            Body Paragraph 1

A.   Topic sentence: The more people are afraid of getting vaccinated, the more lives we lose.

B.    Supporting point: the numbers of people is infected by covid-19 and its variant continue to rise rapidly every day.

1.     detail: APA citation, Worldometer: on July 25^th the world: 194,699,546 cases total death 4,712,555 people; the US in the first place 35,396,671 cases total death 626,713 people

2.     detail: front-line workers are working tiredly with patients; hospitals are shortage of ventilators and medical supplies. IUC was taken full capacities.

C.    Supporting point: The variant could kill more people in a fast pace.

1.     detail: The variant was able to stay longer in the air, easily spread in closer contact, and infect to a large amount of people.

2.     detail: the people who was infected with the variant was in severe cases which lead to lung, heart, organ, brain failure and death.

III.          Body Paragraph 2

A.   Topic/transition sentence: Vaccinated people are effectively immune against the virus over 90 percent.

B.    Supporting point: the individual who receive at least 1 dose of vaccines are covid -free

1.     detail: FDA prove that vaccines are effective up to over 90% with 2 doses of Moderna and Pfizer, 70% with 1 dose of J&J.

2.     detail: after more people are vaccinated, the number of covid infection decreases, the severity of cases, and death cases also decreases.

C.    Supporting point: hospitals are released pressure on covid patients.

1.     detail: Thanks to covid vaccines, people are mildly impacted if infected. They can stay home and recover by themselves.

2.     detail: hospitals were saved from dire circumstances and were to expanse capacity and handle better care of services.

D.   Supporting point: People are able to do things like prior covid.

1.     detail: authorities lift up restriction for vaccinated people, ditch up masking and shelter in place.

2.     Detail: workers back to the office, and students can go back to school.

IV.          Body Paragraph 3

A.   Topic/transition sentence: Covid-19 vaccines heal the world and reopen international travels again.

B.    Supporting point: After months to years of travel ban, some countries start to reopen international travels again.

1.     detail: up lift requirement of quarantine for those who vaccinated.

2.     detail: some countries agreed with covid visa. (QR code) for international flight

C.    Supporting point: After a long waiting, Olympic Tokyo 2020 finally take place.

1.     Detail: without vaccine, the Olympic organization can’t hold the events.

2.     Detail: the events not only manifest the sport spirit but also manifest the unity of the work: vaccinated athlete are able to compete their game.

V.            Body Paragraph 4

A.   Topic/transition sentence: Covid-19 vaccine was love and caring to others.

B.    Supporting point: vaccines help elderly to meet their children again

1.     detail: they can again hug and kiss their children

2.     detail:  they can spend time with their family like prior covid life.

C.    Supporting point: getting vaccine is such a role paying contributed to society on covid battles.

1.     detail: because getting vaccine not only protect us but also people around us

2.     detail: we get through this together.

VI.          Conclusion

A.   Restatement of thesis: everyone should get the covid vaccine.

B.    So what? Call to actions for those not still unvaccinated, please get one. Lead to the world of covid free.

this is introduction and first paragraph i developed by myself:

Since the first COVID-19 case was confirmed in the US, lockdowns, stay-at-home orders, masks mandate, and social distancing were immediately the safety protocols to slow the transmission of the virus. Temporary, but necessary, the measures were moderately taken into account to minimize deaths and save lives. However, for a lifelong community without COVID-19, what is the best practice to cope with a pandemic? According to CDC and top leading health experts, to stop the virus, the community must achieve herd immunity which was getting people vaccinated more than 70 percent of the population. The vaccination rollout needs to proceed fast before the virus damages our people, health workers, and the capacity of our hospitals. While the world pleas for vaccine access, Americans find it simple to get shots in arms. The United States, the top leading country of the COVID-19 vaccine manufacture and distribution, has three vaccines approved by the FDA in proven the COVID-19 immune efficacy and already expands their accessibility for everyone who is 12 years and older. Therefore, as soon as possible, all people in the US regardless of race, sex, and religion should get the COVID-19 vaccine in order to combat the deadly virus.

First Paragraph

The more people that are afraid of getting vaccinated, the more lives we lose. As of today, according to Worldometer report, there are 194,699,546 people infected; 4,712,555 people were killed. For the US alone, there are 35,396,671 new cases, 626,713 people dead. We are at rank one on the list, and those accelerating have no signal to stop. Like many other deadly respiratory viruses, human beings need vaccine to beat the virus, so does COVID-19. At the moment the vaccine trials were underway of the last phase, the death cases were increased multiply among those infected. For instance, there are 7,157 in March 2020; 65,471 in April 2020. And then 104,904 in January 2021. The Fear of death apparently was one thing, but the fear of people not understanding how COVID-19 spreads and not keeping the measure in place was extremely significant. Overwhelmed, confused, stressed, and anxious, the US hospitals had been under dire circumstances. Since chaos stayed in multiple dynamics, those patients who tested positive for COVID-19 became severely ill, but they couldn’t be hospitalized as ICU beds are at the max of its capacity. Additionally, hospitals were scrambling with shortages of ventilators, the ability of testing, supplies, medical staff, and nurses. In the epic center of the outbreak, some hospitals must build mobile facilities to adapt to the growing magnitude. Nurses and doctors were tiredly disappointed; dead bodies were stagged. Not long after Moderna, Pfizer, and Johnson & Johnson were approved for the emergency uses, the confirmed cases started going down the slope, and death rates magically decreased. However, Due to the hesitancy from people who are worried about the shots, the quantity of the vaccinated is specifically low despite authority’s warning and encouragement. In the meantime, the virus mutated to new strains that gained concerns about vaccine efficacy. The variants, such as Delta, are more dangerous and contagious than the original. It could stay longer in the air and attack into the body in closer bubble spaces. According to Dr Anthony Fauci, the director of the U.S. National Institute of Allergy and Infectious Diseases, speed up vaccination is key to beat the virus. The vaccines are capable to keep people out of hospitals and severe illnesses. Those vaccinated are possibly contracted to the virus, but it was no longer life-threatening. Eventually, we all know that everyone needs to take action now; however, what people are worried is understandable because under the unprecedented boost for approval how effective does the vaccine work?