my paper needs to be revised…Must have a clear philosophic

my paper needs to be revised…Must have a clear philosophical reason logic. Create a logical analysis.Focus on 1 or 2 lines of reasoning and how those conclusions are reached. What are the premises and what are the connections between thoughts. What new premises does the threat of punishment create and how does it effect reasoning. The reasoning behind ppl drunk driving is that they believe if they still have coordination and are not slurring their words they are competent enough to drive and since there may not be cops on the road they wont get caught. Yet traffic cameras are always watching therefore they can be caught.