I want you revise my essay which checked by my professor. Pl

I want you revise my essay which checked by my professor. Please follow the guideline sheet.Here is your paper with comments.Both poems do not specifically address male or female. When referringto the speaker in the poems, you will include him/her or he/she;Both poems do not describe a loss of a loved one. In Oliver’s poem, thespeaker describes how he/she discovered that something from the pastturned into something positive in the present. Someone that the speakerknew gave him/her a negative gift–it couldbe a simple ‘No’ to a request, to not being there to help out in asituation. Oliver’s poem is not specifically about a love one. Thetheme in both poems: how the past impact the present.In contrast, Bishop’s poem is simply a speaker describing how thelessons from the past helped him/her grow up about losing things,object, and people. The past presented a positive learning experiencein the present for the him/her. It is not about losinga loved one. Although this is the last stanza, this part of the lessonof adapting a positive lesson in losing small to large things andpeople.