Use my draft paper and continue to write another 3-4 pages (

Use my draft paper and continue to write another 3-4 pages ( 8 pages minimum). Please follow this guideline to fix some issues on my paper: – When describing your population, you can be more general (e.g. college students). If you would like to describe SJSU students specifically, provide more detail for your reader Provide more detail regarding the significance of the disparity to your population. It is ok to bring in additional studies, but you need a broader range of findings/perspectives (i.e. more than one research study). Overall, the significance section needs to be flushed out more You make a lot of declarative statements throughout that are not cited. Make sure that you properly cite whenever you are making evidence-based claims The factors section does a good job of grounding the research within the ecological model. Remember, your final paper will do this for all sections (see examples provided on Canvas) Overall, a good start here