The first document is the draft need to fixed, and next to

The first document is the draft need to fixed, and next to are the instructionsproblem u need to fixed:What are the larger concepts or patterns coming out of his texts–What makes Scarry’s texts INTERESTING? (consideer this two questions)At beginning:Who is Nodelman? How can you link Nodeleman to Richard Scarry togetherConsider starting your essay with this image to give your readers something to picture. Are there any interesting tensions or paradoxes that come from this imagery or your experiences/knowledge of Scarry?Body paragraph:consider two question I listed above, and expand your body paragraph, you will need a greater detail of Richard Scarry’s work.I am noticing that most of your first sentences are narrative based (they tell a story or give background information)–how might you revise this essay so that your topic sentences put forward an interpretive argument? What are the concepts or tensions or questions that you are exploring within Scarry’s work? Put that thinking at the beginning of the paragraph.“Society applauds when the typical path is taken.”(last sentence of the paragraph b4 talk about bell) This could be the beginning of an interpretive argument–that society rewards ‘normalcy’–what would it look like to emphasize this as an argument, using it to structure your thinking and to question/complicate this claim as you move through your exhibit source (Beauty and the Beast)?After talk About Bell:You do not need so much description for Bell, the main purpose of this essay is explain and expand Richard Scarry work. I plan to cut off half of the Bell story.How can you link Bell to Richard Scarry, you need a breif explaination, and deep analyiz.Conclusion:add a conculsion for the essay, this conclusion will summeaize all elements of the paragaoh.