Research Paper for Dance.

Hi, I am doing my research paper on the choregrapher Mary Wigman.

Here are the original instructions: Choose a choreographer (e.g. George Balanchine, Mary Wigman, Bill T. Jones etc.), or a dance form ( Choose something that is genuinely interesting to you, with the understanding that you want plenty of reliable sources to draw from for your paper.

 Your research will result in a 5-6 page paper (plus a bibliography page) that further explores the choreographer, dance form, era in dance history, or topic you are covering. 

Also, this was my instructor’s feedback on the proposal I did: Great subject. Also your sources are excellent. It appears you are proposing to write about Mary Wigman. What is your specific focus? Is it about Wigmans rebellion against classical dance styles? Her impact on the German Expressionist movement?

so please choose a specific focus when writing about Mary Wigman. (Im going to attach the proposal.)

 

Remember to check for spelling, grammar, and verb tenses.  (Regarding verb tenses: The man went to the park and takes his dog with him should instead be The man went to the park and took his dog with him. And your verb tenses should at least agree within the same paragraph.) Always run spelling and grammar check under tools.  Be sure to double check spelling and grammar. Heres an example: preformed when you mean performed.  Since both are actual words, spell check will not catch this. 

 

                                                                                                             Please use proper, academic language.  (Hint:  Do not use guys and girls when you intend men and women. Do not use slang. When in doubt, look up the word in question to see if it is recognized in a dictionary – and not the Urban Dictionary, please!)

 

 *Titles of dances should be in italics.  Quotations should only be used when you are directly quoting someone.