Explain why you think the market value of Adelphia fell so dramatically with the footnote disclosure that the company had guaranteed loans to an entity owned by the companys CEO and his family.

This is a strong rationale for your group, and it is supported with clear goals and cited evidence to support the justification for why this group is so needed in school, particularly in light of the effects of societal pressures on LGBTQ young people.  This is a strong and compelling argument for the critical need of this type of group; and the cited research documenting the vulnerability of this population in schools makes a very strong case.  

You mention ACT, etc. – in that paragraph, also provide  justification for the particular use of person-centered Rogerian therapy as stated in your PD statement. By outlining the benefits of this theoretical approach and how it will operate to assist group members specifically in a couple of examples, your reader will be left with a clear understanding of why this orientation is chosen above others.

please fix the edits based on all this 

Thank you