I have written a draft of the essay and need you to revise it without using AI.

I have written a draft of the essay and need you to revise it without using AI. I need to improve the sentence structure and fluidity of the essay.

Except for the introduction and conclusion, please include quotes (and cite them) within your paper; however, your paper should NOT exceed 25% quoted material — 3/4’s of the paper should be in your own words, even if you are paraphrasing your research, and yes, please cite all of that paraphrased or summarized information.

APA recommends 10% of the paper be quoted material, but as long as you keep it to 25% or less, you should be okay. If you are including a quote that is 40+ words, you must format it as a BLOCK INDENT — if you don’t know what this is, the entire section gets tabbed in (the quotation marks disappear) and the citation appears at the end of the block of quoted text.

Except for the introduction and conclusion, please include citations for your paraphrased and summarized information–where is your information coming from? Without the citations, your paper will sound like your opinion, which is NOT the purpose for this assignment; it should be the 180° opposite of an opinion paper, hence the term: Research Paper.

Minimum word count: 1000-1250 (approximately 4 to 5 pages)

Content and Organization: Contains an introduction with a compelling thesis, body paragraphs that effectively support the thesis by drawing on credible sources, and a conclusion that demonstrates a synthesis of the main points.

APA format: Title page; Times New Roman, 12-point font; double-spaced; 1-inch margins; running header with shortened title aligned left and page number aligned right.

APA citations: Appropriate in-text citations (APA) throughout the paper when quoting or paraphrasing; a separate reference page with only the sources that you used in the body of the paper.

Provide adequate support for your thesis with at least three appropriate references using textbooks, websites, and peer-reviewed journal articles (3 sources minimum).
At least one of the sources must be a peer-reviewed article from a professional journal.
Sources should be published within the last 5 years unless recent research is not available or if you are referencing seminal work.
Do not use Wikipedia or an encyclopedia because they are not considered academic sources.
Grammar and Style: Clear and understandable language with no grammar or spelling errors. Effective use of transitions to show logical connections and to improve the flow of the writing.