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42950I have attached my rough draft ( which I had you guys write for me),the rubrics with my instructors comments, and annotated biography. *** THE TITLE OF MY PAPER IS THERAPY FOR DEPRESSION ( Please fix for final paper)****
This is the final paper!!!
Name: Module 04 Course Project – Rough Draft
Description: Using your annotated bibliography and references as a guide, write a rough draft of your Psychology Research Paper. Your paper must be 3 pages in length, not including a title page and reference page. The paper must not only describe current trends within your topic area, but you should demonstrate how your topic relates to the broad field of psychology. It should contain a strong thesis statement supported by research from at least 3 different sources. Include both in-text citations and a References page in APA format.
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Meets or Exceeds Expectations Mostly Meets Expectations Does Not Meet Expectations or Missing Information
The report presents a strong thesis supported by evidence from research.
Points Range: 8 (16.00%) – 10 (20.00%)
Thesis statement is clear and easy to follow. Sources from annotated bibliography are used to support thesis throughout the paper.
Points: 7 (14.00%)
Points Range: 4 (8.00%) – 7 (14.00%)
Thesis statement is not fully developed, but supported by sources from annotated bibliography.
Feedback:
It does not appear that a clear thesis has been developed. However, I am generally understanding the topic. I would encourage you to make a very clear and concise introduction page. See suggestions made in paper.
Points Range: 0 (0.00%) – 3 (6.00%)
Thesis statement is missing. Sources are not relevant to selected topic.
The report describes current trends within their topic area.
Points: 10 (20.00%)
Points Range: 8 (16.00%) – 10 (20.00%)
Provides accurate, engaging information about selected topic and current trends.
Feedback:
You provide relevant information to your topic that helps understand more about these disorders and treatment.
Points Range: 4 (8.00%) – 7 (14.00%)
Provides information about trends but not current.
Points Range: 0 (0.00%) – 3 (6.00%)
Lacks information about trends or missing entirely.
Language is clear and professional recognizing an academic audience.
Points Range: 8 (16.00%) – 10 (20.00%)
Uses clear, professional language. Sentences are concise and easy to follow.
Points: 7 (14.00%)
Points Range: 4 (8.00%) – 7 (14.00%)
Uses somewhat clear and professional language but could be better.
Feedback:
I had some difficultly knowing what information was just put in your paper temporarily as a reference and what was part of the structure. Some of your sentences were a bit long and hard to follow. I made comments in your paper about this.
Points Range: 0 (0.00%) – 3 (6.00%)
Does not use professional language and needs revision.
Proper mechanics such as grammar and spelling are followed.
Points: 5 (10.00%)
Points Range: 5 (10.00%) – 5 (10.00%)
Excellent writing, free of spelling or grammatical errors.
Feedback:
Overall, I am confident in your writing ability and think with some adjustments your final course project will be free of any spelling or grammatical errors.
Points Range: 3 (6.00%) – 3 (6.00%)
Some spelling and grammatical errors present in paper.
Points Range: 0 (0.00%) – 0 (0.00%)
Several spelling and grammatical errors present in paper.
The paper is 3 pages in length not including a title page and reference page.
Points: 5 (10.00%)
Points Range: 5 (10.00%) – 5 (10.00%)
Meets page length requirement and includes proper title and reference pages.
Feedback:
You exceed the page limit quite a bit. I made some suggestions on how to structure your paper to be more concise.
Points Range: 3 (6.00%) – 3 (6.00%)
Does not meet paper length requirement. Title page and/or reference page need adjustments.
Points Range: 0 (0.00%) – 0 (0.00%)
Does not meet paper length requirement. No title page or reference page.
Correct APA formatting.
Points: 9 (18.00%)
Points Range: 8 (16.00%) – 10 (20.00%)
Meets APA formatting requirements.
Feedback:
There were a few minor APA errors. Please see comments in paper. Also, be sure your entire paper is in Times New Roman, Size 12.
Points Range: 4 (8.00%) – 7 (14.00%)
Meets most APA formatting requirements with some adjustments needed.
Points Range: 0 (0.00%) – 3 (6.00%)
APA formatting is not used appropriately or missing entirely.
The rubric total value of 43.00 has been overridden with a value of 43.00 out of 50.
Name:Module 04 Course Project – Rough Draft
Description:Using your annotated bibliography and references as a guide, write a rough draft of your Psychology Research Paper. Your paper must be 3 pages in length, not including a title page and reference page. The paper must not only describe current trends within your topic area, but you should demonstrate how your topic relates to the broad field of psychology. It should contain a strong thesis statement supported by research from at least 3 different sources. Include both in-text citations and a References page in APA format.
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