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1.substance should be Substance in definition.
2.In your question you have mental health conditions. In your definition section, you have mental disorder. Pick one and use it consistently.
3.Mental disorders definition: The health complications sentence does not belong here. You address that in Consequences. Last sentence needs a source.
4.SUD definition: Where are sources for the second and third sentences?
5.You need a definition for substance abuse counseling, and major types like RPT
6.Last sentence in co-occurring definition needs a source.
7.APA: The first word of each paragraph should be indented 5 spaces.
8.Part C should be in three sub sections, each with its own heading: YOU NEED TO TALLY REVISE THIS SECTION
Statistics
Major Causes
Major Consequences
It states this in the assignment in the syllabus
9.Page 9, Part C you start by talking about psychological health consequences. That goes in Consequences. Statistics should be only on % of the U S population, and specifically women that have co-occurring MH and SUD.
9. This draft was not to address II or beyond
10. How can you draft Part IV when you haven’t finished III B.? How can you reach a conclusion in III. A Introduction when you have not completed III B
11.Stop using “On the other hand”
12.Schafer (2019): You do not say how many were in the experimental group versus the TAU group; what measures were used and how frequently administered; how of was the RPT administered? What about the Seeking Safety intervention? How is seeking safety a SA counseling technique? You seem to imply that. What was the gender breakdown in the study? Your focus is on women.
13.McKee: A systematic review needs to state years covered in the review; number of articles reviewed; databases used; and overall results
14. Sugarman: Delete Furthermore. What was the intervention specifically? How often was it administered? What measures were used and how often were they administered?
15.Tapia: Delete “Finally”. Where conducted? Need details on the intervention and how often administered. You say the measures were only administered post-treatment. That is impossible if there is a p value.
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